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How many times have I dissopointed you?
How manytimes have I let you down?

I try and try agian.
            But
no matter what Ido
no matter how hard I try
I always let you down.

How many times have I said "I will."?
And never done a thing about it.

How many times have I said "I pomise."
or "I'm sorry."?
Far to many time's because thoes words mean nothing to you anymore.

Well now instead of telling you that
I'm just going to do it.

So that you'll be proud of me.
So that you wont get mad at me for that any more. So that we wont
have to have that same talk over and
over again.
So that you wont give me that dissopointing look and sigh.

Because your my mom and you diserve alot better.
©2008-2010 ~vampirefreek
:iconvampirefreek:

Author's Comments

well its a poem I've written for my mom...I've let her down so many time...and I hate it so I want to make it up to her.

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:iconsacredangelalexeil:
Has she seen the poem?

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These voices won't leave me alone.
:iconnaruto93:
thats sweet

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There is really no point in reading this... Why are you still reading this?! GO AWAY DAMNIT!!

Boredom is to Stupidity as Stupidity is to Mwah!!
:iconroodpart:
its good that you wrote this for your mother i know ive saied sory alot to my mother and keep on doing what i was suppose to stop doing, its a very good poem although very sad from my point of view.

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wolfwood:"your hurting on the inside yet you grin and bear it,
well thats this mans opinion anyway,
thats why i have this confesional!!!!"

vash:"aaaaagggggghhhh!!!!"
:iconvampirefreek:
no not yet

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I love piggies ^ . ^
There so cute.
:iconvampirefreek:
^^ thank you

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I love piggies ^ . ^
There so cute.
:iconvampirefreek:
well thank you...I wrote this right after I got grounded and my mom told me I like a hour so i posted it in that time ^^.

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I love piggies ^ . ^
There so cute.
:iconkairas-blood:
this is great

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red roses stand for love, black rose stand for beauty and hate, but what does a rose mean when its planted with love, watered with beauty, but grows slowly in this world of hate???

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